At the beginning of the semester I would just write and not think about structure or any order in my writing. My paragraphs were very messy and unorganized. As we kept learning I would use the tools that I was givin to strengthen my writing. This made my writing more fluid and made more sence. Below is an example of an original paragraph I wrote and then a new version of that paragraph using TRIAC paragraph structure.
Using the book “They Say I Say” it improved my paragraphs in a way of making my words clearer with actual meaning. The book helped me a lot with my sentence structures giving everything true meaning. The book also helped me learn how to put my ideas first and then relate everything around it, making my essays more I say. My essays felt like they had more meaning to me as they came from my honest beliefs
I felt as I incorporated the TRIAC method it strengthened my writing and made it have more of a point to it. I felt as though what I was stating was clearer after I had revised using this method. The process wasn’t too hard as it was just adding in more information to help the reader understand. As soon as I added a good topic it made my paragraph smoother. Overall this is a good method to get ideas across in a clearer way and more informational and I will be using it more in my future essays.
